Monday, November 30, 2015

Monday's Links to Writing & Marketing Blog Posts

By: C.S. Lakin

Our focus this month is on words: specifically, adverbs, superfluous verbiage, tics, and “weasel words.” Overuse of such words constitutes our Fatal Flaw #11, a pox on many writers’ prose.

Before I jump into my own topic on this flaw, a few words about said.

Said, when used with a pronoun, creates what’s known as a dialog (or speaker) tag: it’s a phrase that tells us who’s speaking. He said, she said, they said, he called, she cried, he replied, and all the rest.

Beginning writers, zealous to eliminate weasel words (and occasionally armed with bad advice about “passive language”) sometimes slash this one mercilessly. But that’s not always a good idea.

Said, while it’s admittedly boring, is invisible. Readers don’t really notice it unless it’s used so often that it becomes extreme. In almost every case, the words we would use to replace it are worse: “Shut up!” he implored. “No!” she protested. “Please stop!” they cajoled. (Tags that actually identify a special action—like screaming, whining, or whispering—are fine where appropriate.)

But you don’t just want to end every line of dialog with “she said” either. And while paragraphing and conversational interplay will sometimes let us know who’s speaking without any extra direction from the author, writing dialog without any tags at all can get confusing (especially if you have more than two people in conversation).

The best call is to use dialog tags—use said, in fact, and its equally invisible counterpart asked—but use them sparingly, not after every line of dialog. And for the rest of the space? There are action beats.

Introducing the Action Beat

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Happy writing and running, Kathy

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